I liked this Chapter 2 so much also Monica! Your way of putting things into words transposed me to that past; for a few minutes I was your invisible witness in those rooms and the elevator. And there are quite some sentences I liked on their own: “The words were pounding their fists into my brain” !
I like the metaphor of the marriage as a micro-universe and how you describe the elevator experience. I could imagine it very well, just like in a movie. I could not stop reading although it was way too late..
I liked this Chapter 2 so much also Monica! Your way of putting things into words transposed me to that past; for a few minutes I was your invisible witness in those rooms and the elevator. And there are quite some sentences I liked on their own: “The words were pounding their fists into my brain” !
I like the metaphor of the marriage as a micro-universe and how you describe the elevator experience. I could imagine it very well, just like in a movie. I could not stop reading although it was way too late..